Content Creation: The 3-Pass Editing System That Maintains Voice
Content Creation: The 3-Pass Editing System That Maintains Voice
Meta Description: AI cut content creation time by 50% (14 hours saved in 90 days), but maintaining brand voice is hard. Here’s the 3-pass editing system that works.
Raw AI content sounds like AI content.
It’s smooth. Professional. Completely generic. No edge. No personality. The kind of content you read and forget immediately.
We saved 14 hours on content creation in 90 days using AI. But we almost lost our brand voice in the process.
Here’s the 3-pass editing system that lets you use AI for speed while maintaining the voice that makes your content yours.
The Data: 14 Hours Saved on Content
From our 90-day experiment:
| Task Type | Count | Hours Saved | Avg/Task | Quality |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Blog posts | 9 | 6 hours | 0.67 hrs | Neutral (after editing) |
| Course materials | 5 | 4 hours | 0.8 hrs | Positive |
| Marketing copy | 3 | 2 hours | 0.67 hrs | Neutral (after editing) |
| Email campaigns | 2 | 2 hours | 1.0 hr | Positive |
| Total | 19 | 14 hours | 0.74 hrs | Neutral to Positive |
Key insight: Time saved was moderate (0.74 hours/task), but quality was “neutral” without heavy editing. AI gets you 70% there. The final 30% is where brand voice lives.
Quality after 3-pass editing: Positive. Indistinguishable from human-written content in blind tests.
The Problem with Raw AI Content
Here’s what happens when you use AI-generated content directly:
Raw AI Output (ChatGPT, Claude, etc.):
Prompt: “Write a blog intro about how AI helps with security testing”
AI Output:
In today's rapidly evolving digital landscape, security testing has become
more crucial than ever. Organizations are constantly seeking innovative ways
to protect their systems and data. Artificial Intelligence (AI) has emerged
as a powerful tool in this domain, offering unprecedented capabilities to
identify vulnerabilities and strengthen defenses. In this article, we'll
explore how AI is revolutionizing security testing and what it means for
your organization.
Problems:
- Generic opening (“In today’s rapidly evolving…”)
- Corporate buzzwords (“unprecedented capabilities,” “revolutionary”)
- No specific data or hooks
- Could be about any topic if you swapped words
- Sounds like every other AI-written article
After 3-Pass Editing (Alien Brain Trust Voice):
Security testing is tedious. You need hundreds of test cases. Edge cases.
Attack vectors. Adversarial inputs. It's the kind of work that makes
engineers zone out after the 47th SQL injection variant.
AI doesn't zone out.
In 90 days, AI saved us 52 hours on security testing—an average of 2.3
hours per task, the highest time savings of any category we tracked. More
importantly, AI-generated tests caught vulnerabilities human testers
consistently missed.
Improvements:
- Concrete problem (tedious testing)
- Real data (52 hours, 2.3 hours/task)
- Specific example (47th SQL injection)
- Short sentences. Punchy. No fluff.
- Alien Brain Trust voice (data-driven, authentic, no hype)
The difference: Brand voice. Specificity. Data. Personality.
The 3-Pass Editing System
Here’s the framework that maintains brand voice while using AI for speed:
Pass 1: Draft (AI Does the Heavy Lifting)
Goal: Get structure and content on the page fast
Process:
- Write a detailed prompt with your brand voice guidelines
- Include examples of your voice (paste previous content)
- Specify tone, structure, and data to include
- Let AI generate a complete first draft
Time: 5-10 minutes (including prompt writing)
Example Prompt:
Write a blog post about [topic] using Alien Brain Trust voice:
VOICE GUIDELINES:
- Concise and authentic (no fluff, no hype, no clickbait)
- Lead with data/results
- Short sentences. Punchy. No corporate buzzwords.
- "Here's what we did, here's what we learned" format
- Include specific numbers and examples
- Honest about failures
STRUCTURE:
- Hook with data (lead with the result)
- Problem statement (why this matters)
- What we did (specific actions)
- What we learned (insights)
- How to replicate (actionable steps)
DATA TO INCLUDE:
- [Specific metrics, examples, failures]
EXAMPLES OF OUR VOICE:
[Paste 2-3 paragraphs from previous posts]
Now write the post.
Output: A complete draft that’s 60-70% there
Pass 2: Refine (Human Adds Specificity)
Goal: Replace generic AI content with specific examples and data
Process:
- Read through the draft
- Find generic statements and replace with specifics
- Add data, examples, and real stories
- Cut corporate buzzwords and replace with plain language
- Verify technical accuracy
Time: 10-15 minutes
Editing Checklist:
Generic → Specific:
- ❌ “significantly improved” → ✅ “60% reduction (22 hours saved)”
- ❌ “powerful capabilities” → ✅ “generated 1,200+ test cases in 4 hours”
- ❌ “best practices” → ✅ “the 3-pass editing system we use”
Buzzwords → Plain Language:
- ❌ “leverage synergies” → ✅ “use AI for repetitive work”
- ❌ “paradigm shift” → ✅ “changes how teams work”
- ❌ “cutting-edge” → ✅ “new” (or just delete it)
Vague → Concrete:
- ❌ “This can save time” → ✅ “This saved us 14 hours in 90 days”
- ❌ “It’s helpful for” → ✅ “We used this to”
- ❌ “You might consider” → ✅ “Do this:”
Example:
Before (AI Draft):
Using AI for content creation offers numerous benefits. It can significantly
accelerate your workflow while maintaining quality standards. Many
organizations have found success by implementing AI-assisted processes.
After (Human Refinement):
AI cut our content time by 50%—14 hours saved in 90 days across 19 pieces.
But raw AI output is generic. You need a system to maintain voice while
gaining speed.
Changes:
- Replaced “numerous benefits” with specific data (50%, 14 hours, 19 pieces)
- Cut “maintaining quality standards” (vague)
- Replaced “many organizations” with “our” (personal, specific)
- Eliminated corporate tone entirely
Pass 3: Humanize (Add Voice and Edge)
Goal: Make it sound like you, not a robot
Process:
- Read it out loud (does it sound like you talking?)
- Add personality (opinions, hot takes, humor if appropriate)
- Vary sentence length (AI loves same-length sentences)
- Add transitions that feel natural
- Include contractions, casual language where appropriate
Time: 5-10 minutes
Humanizing Techniques:
Sentence Variety: AI writes like this:
Documentation is important. It helps onboard new developers. It prevents
bugs. It makes code maintainable.
Humans write like this:
Documentation is important. It helps onboard new developers, prevents bugs,
and makes code maintainable. Nobody likes writing it. AI changes that.
Opinion and Edge: AI writes neutral:
There are different approaches to this problem, each with its own advantages.
Humans have opinions:
Everyone's asking the wrong question about AI and development. "How much
faster can I code?" Wrong question.
Contractions and Casual Language: AI writes formally:
You cannot use AI for everything. It is not magic.
Humans write conversationally:
AI isn't magic. It's a tool. Sometimes it saves hours. Sometimes it wastes them.
Personal Examples: AI writes generically:
Teams often encounter challenges when implementing this approach.
Humans write personally:
We tried this. It failed. Here's why.
Real Example: Blog Post (Full 3-Pass Process)
Topic: “How we use skills as guardrails”
Pass 1: AI Draft (10 minutes)
Prompt:
Write a blog post about using Claude Code skills as guardrails to catch bugs.
Include:
- Real example: /review-pr skill caught 3 hardcoded API keys in 90 days
- The intern analogy (AI is like a smart intern who needs structure)
- 7 skills we use daily (commit, review-pr, fix-tests, etc.)
- Time saved from skills: 43+ hours in 90 days
Use Alien Brain Trust voice: concise, data-driven, no hype, lead with results.
[Paste voice examples]
AI Output: 1200-word draft with structure, examples, but generic tone
Pass 2: Refine (15 minutes)
Changes made:
- Replaced “Skills are helpful” with “Skills caught 5 production bugs”
- Added specific bug examples (race condition, SQL injection, etc.)
- Cut buzzwords (“unprecedented,” “innovative,” “game-changing”)
- Added data to every claim (hours saved, bug counts, task numbers)
- Verified technical accuracy of code examples
Pass 3: Humanize (10 minutes)
Changes made:
- Rewrote intro: “Everyone’s treating AI like either magic or garbage. Both views are wrong.”
- Added personality: “The intern analogy (Because it’s perfect)”
- Varied sentence length throughout
- Added opinions: “That’s exactly what AI is” (definitive, not hedging)
- Made transitions more conversational
Total time: 35 minutes (vs. 60-90 minutes writing from scratch) Quality: Indistinguishable from fully human-written in blind test
When AI Helps (and When It Hurts)
After 19 content creation tasks:
AI Excels At:
✅ Structure and outline - Getting sections and flow right ✅ First drafts - Filling the blank page quickly ✅ Research synthesis - Combining multiple sources ✅ Formatting - Markdown, tables, code blocks ✅ Idea generation - Brainstorming angles and hooks
AI Struggles With:
❌ Brand voice - Sounds generic without heavy editing ❌ Nuance - Misses subtle distinctions and implications ❌ Storytelling - Can structure a story but can’t make it compelling ❌ Hot takes - Always hedges, never commits to strong opinions ❌ Humor - Attempts jokes but they fall flat
The Decision Framework:
Does the content need a strong brand voice?
├─ YES → Use 3-pass system (AI draft, human refine, humanize)
└─ NO → Raw AI might be fine (technical docs, structured content)
Maintaining Brand Voice: The Checklist
Before publishing AI-assisted content, check:
Voice Checks
- Sounds like you (read it out loud)
- No corporate buzzwords or jargon
- Specific examples, not generic advice
- Data and numbers throughout
- Sentence variety (short and long)
- Personal pronouns (we, our, I) not third person
Content Checks
- Hook leads with data or result
- Examples are real, not hypothetical
- Technical claims are accurate
- No false promises or hype
- Failures and iterations included
- Actionable takeaways provided
Tone Checks
- Authentic (not trying to impress)
- Concise (no fluff)
- Honest (admits limitations)
- Opinionated where appropriate
- Respectful but not deferential
Tools and Techniques
Tool 1: Voice Examples Library
Create a doc with 10-15 examples of your best writing. Use these in prompts to train AI on your voice.
Our library includes:
- 3 blog intro paragraphs (how we hook readers)
- 5 transition sentences (how we connect ideas)
- 4 conclusion paragraphs (how we end posts)
- 10 sentences showing our sentence variety
Usage: Paste 2-3 examples in every content prompt
Tool 2: Brand Voice Guidelines Doc
Write down your voice principles explicitly:
Alien Brain Trust Voice:
- Lead with data (hours saved, vulnerabilities fixed, tasks completed)
- Short sentences for emphasis. Varied length overall.
- No buzzwords (revolutionary, unprecedented, game-changing, etc.)
- Honest about failures
- “Here’s what we did” not “Here’s what you should do”
- Security considerations always included
- Contractions and casual language
- Strong opinions when warranted
Usage: Include in every content prompt
Tool 3: The “Could This Be About Anything?” Test
If you can swap out topic-specific words and the content still works, it’s too generic.
Generic (fails test):
In today's fast-paced world, [TOPIC] is more important than ever.
Organizations are seeking new ways to [VERB] their [NOUN].
Specific (passes test):
Security testing is tedious. AI saved us 52 hours in 90 days by generating
1,200+ test cases. But you need guardrails or AI will introduce
vulnerabilities.
Usage: Apply to every AI-generated paragraph
Tool 4: Before/After Examples
Keep a doc of bad AI output and your edited versions. This trains you to spot generic content faster.
Example:
BEFORE: "This approach offers significant benefits for teams"
AFTER: "This saved us 22 hours in 90 days across 31 docs"
BEFORE: "Consider implementing this workflow"
AFTER: "Here's the 30-day implementation plan we used"
The Bottom Line
14 hours saved on content in 90 days. 50% reduction in content time.
But time saved isn’t the full story.
The real value: AI handles structure and drafting (the tedious parts). Humans handle voice and refinement (the valuable parts).
Raw AI content is generic. Everyone sounds the same.
The 3-pass system—draft (AI), refine (add specificity), humanize (add voice)—lets you keep your edge while gaining speed.
The question isn’t “Should I use AI for content?”
It’s: “How do I use AI without losing what makes my content mine?”
The answer: Structure the editing. Pass 1: Speed. Pass 2: Specificity. Pass 3: Voice.
That’s how you get leverage without losing personality.
Next in this series: Post 7 covers AI for project management—automating Linear issue creation, triaging support requests, and the meeting notes → action items → GitHub issues pipeline.
Try this today: Use AI to draft a blog post or email. Then do 3 passes: (1) add data/examples, (2) cut buzzwords, (3) add voice. Compare the before and after.